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>>45919
Set the rules for your universe and don't break them.
If you are using 1st POV, only describe things someone would actually think about.
Make sure the dialogue between characters flows nicely and sounds natural.
When you start to choose which sprites to use when, make sure you are not having the characters jump emotions at every line. People don't just jump around, they have a logical progression. It doesn't go, 1 min I'm laughing, next min, I'm frowning, next min, smiling, next min, crying, now smirking, now sighing, It looks like your characters have something wrong with them.
Keep the story tight, every scene should have a reason, a purpose and influence the story.
Don't drag it down by going into tons of random side stuff that changes, or influences nothing. The same can be said for written passages as well, to a bit lesser extent.
Just a few things that first appeared in my head. If you want more, I would be happy to list more things, in an IM, email, skype, whatever.
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