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>>53237
The girl he's talking to is shy. The "huh's" all come from her, too, and she's pre-occupied during the conversation checking on her phone. I guess that the "huh's" can really drag the conversation out so I'm hunkey-dorey okay with removing them.
In the end, though, I don't want to fuss over perfection too much; At the end of the day, I want to write to the best of my ability, not continuously brush up and get stuck in forever revisions.
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