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I want to say "inconsistency," but that's not exactly true. If nothing else it's consistently terrible.
My main problem would be the way he goes about executing his ideas. He comes up with some cool concepts, but every time he somehow manages to pick apart and destroy everything that made that idea good in the first place over its execution.
One huge problem is the way he paces things. It's like proper pacing is a mystery to the man, and he goes on to write 50+ hours of nothing filling it with maybe 10+ hours of scenes that are actually interesting to read. I'd have no problem with this if the boring scenes at least contributed to the plot in some way, but when they're mostly "It's still fucking raining, do you know how long it has been fucking raining, oh man I wish the old man who totally isn't dead would come out of his study already," it gets old fast.
That brings me to another big point, which would be his tendency to repeat things over and over. Yes, yes, I get the hints and you've shoved the foreshadowing down my throat quite enough already, can we get on with the plot now? What, that was it? It's time for the next chapter? Well so much for that, then.
And one thing...... that's not really a....... problem with just Ryukishi's... writing... but the fucking...... ellipses... all over... the damn...... place......... is really...... painful to... read......
I could go on and on, but that's enough wall of text for now. I was about to jump in the shower before typing all this up anyway.
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